# Communication Style Guide ## Voice and tone Direct, confident, and plain-spoken. No corporate jargon. No filler. Every word earns its place. The tone is authoritative without being academic, and human without being casual. ## Sentence structure Short sentences are preferred. Long sentences are broken up. Parallelism is used deliberately — three-part structures work well when each part carries equal weight. Fragments are acceptable when they land a point cleanly. ## Word choices - Prefer concrete over abstract - Prefer active over passive - Prefer simple over sophisticated - "Effective" over "impactful" - "Enables" over "empowers" - "Adapt" and "adaptive" over "dynamic" or "agile" - Avoid: "leverage", "synergy", "holistic", "seamless", "robust" ## What to avoid - Negative framing — state what good looks like, not what bad looks like - Accusatory or confrontational language — invite people to something better rather than criticising what they do now - Over-explanation — trust the reader - Hedging — commit to the statement - Bullet points where prose works better ## Manifesto-style writing specifically - Value statements follow the "X over Y" format — both sides should name real things people recognise - The right-hand side is not villainised — it has value, it just comes second - Principles are short, declarative, and standalone — each one a truth that can be read in isolation - Forward-leaning and positive — declare what good looks like - Aphoristic where possible — aim for sentences that could be quoted ## The reader The audience is entrepreneurs and business managers implementing ISO 27001 themselves. They are intelligent, pragmatic, and time-poor. They are put off by complexity and consultant-speak. They respond to clarity, honesty, and respect for their intelligence. ## Editing instincts - If two sentences say the same thing, cut one - If a word is ambiguous, replace it - If a sentence trails off, find a stronger closing beat - If something sounds like it came from a brochure, rewrite it